rate_review Reviews

Absolutely love this story, love Jack's foul mouth and his never ending attitude. He's too hilarious, can't wait to see what he says or do once he's in front of Aro.

Please update chapter 24 soon ^_^

Jan

Oooh I can't wait to see what happens please hurry and update this is getting better and better everytime I read it.

AHHHH!!! Not fair we mustn't lose poor Jack, Jasper, Alice and Nikki to the Volturi please tell me someone shows up to help them you know Bella would be a big help shield and all and Edward can tell what they are thinking. Please update soon.

OMG okay keep that up and I'm going to have a coronary trying to wait for the results I like this story a lot.

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

i wanna know!!!!..

This is an amazing story...it would be intriguing if Jack realized he was causing his family pain and decided to return on his own...perhaps, he should spend some time in Mexico though--Maria having turned a young girl in hopes of luring Jack (and like all the mated couples she fills what he needs) and Jack helps her to hold onto her humanity...right before the Volturi come he decides to leave and take her with him...sighs, it is your story, I am in no way trying to tell you what to do, I am merely fantasizing, mostly, I want Jack home and safe but I know there would be no story without a plot so instead I eagerly anticipate your next update!

As for a review on the story? At first I worried it would be a story about an immortal child--but I actually read one once that was kinda awesome so I opened the link to your story and I am very glad I did as it is completely awesome. :D

oh...i do hope he can go back to the cullens...after getting himself starighten out of course.

BAD CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!


but a good chapie!

wow......just wow........

laters! and have fun on the game!

I really like this one! I especially love the "am I bothered" thing. Priceless! Please keep it going!