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for The Tale of Jack

by DancingGrimm

person Airam
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Really well done, and very well Beta'd. I look forward to reading more of your work!
person kylee123
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the ending! Even Goldie found happiness. I laughed at how the town denied any connection with Mr Golightly when he got into trouble. I think you did a very good job of portraying all the characters in the usual small town environment. The man in green has secrets? I cant wait to find out about them. I did however wonder to myself if Finn's house was still up there in the clouds for them to visit from time to time.
person Ltuae42
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Man, this story was awesome, and the fact that you gave it a really honest to goodness happy ending all around just made it even more so. I've been checking for updates for months, and am super glad I did. Kudos to you, for writing characters I actually care about ^_^.
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! I loved how they all got a happy ending(except the crazy teacher). But now you have me curious about the man in the green suit. If it is in another story, I will totally read it!
person tar
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for the next chapter this is just great.
person kylee123
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I need that Goldie goose ASAP! I am so excited for Jack. Now that I think about it, I see why Finn chose to give Goldie to Jack. He knew that she would bring him good luck. I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Goldie really does lay lucky eggs...Poor Jack and Finn...:'(
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you continued this story! I think the whole relationship between Jack and Finn is just so tender, sweet, and sad. I want to know more! What will happen with the bastard?(you know who I'm talking about) Will Jack ever get to see Finn again? And what the frack is up with the dude in the green suit?
person kylee123
schedule February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Waah! How could Finn send Jack and Goldie away? I guess he does not realize that Jack needs to have a friend too since the people in his town are so unfriendly to him. I feel sad thinking about Finn being up there all alone. I wish Jack and his Mom could go live with him there. I hope Goldie will bring some pleasant surprises for Jack and his Mom. Love the story.
person crazykidnikki
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love to read more of this. Can't wait for an update.
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