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July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Jack went to hang out with Finn. I got a good laugh out of Jack's handling the giant penis. I just hope that his mother is okay. It would be so sad if she should die. I am eager to see what you and the man in green have in store for Jack and Finn.
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, and would like to see an update soon! I think it's a very good story, and I like Jack's character.
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, poor Jack. I hope Finn and him live happily ever after. Very good story and I love the writing, great job!
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June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far - keep up the good work
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May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't peruse this section of the site, but I'm so glad I did! This is a wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! I am kind of glad that Jack broke it off with that perverted teacher. It is easy to make money as a prostitute but he should take the chance to find something else to do since he has a little money left over. I hope he will pay down some of those debts so his mother does not have to lose her home. Plus as much as it would hurt her to lose her home, it would kill her to find out that he has been selling himself. Very good chapter. I miss Finn the giant too. I can't wait for them to get together again.
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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! At first, I was a little put off by the modern touches of the story, but I soon let go of those concerns, and really started to feel the story. I am new to fan fiction and this site. I am glad that I read this, because it parallels Jack's discovery with my own. It's big and scary, yet there is an attraction. You have a good pace and engaging writing style. I look forward to reading more of you work.
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be another great story from you. Did I tell you that this has the best opening of any story I have ever read? It's awesome.
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The opening lines for Chapter 2 were quite hilarious. I had a good laugh when Jack scurried under the bed. I love their mutual make out scene. I bet that will fuel Finn's imagination for quite some time. I hope Jack will be able to help his Mama out with the coins. I can't wait to read more. I am also dying and begging and pleading for another chapter of The Blue Prince. Your stories are all fabulous.