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March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story! (and this is coming from a non-twilight fan)
can't wait to read more.
can't wait to read more.
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great update :)
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story i hope the baby has blond hair and looks like Jazz hehe i love J/B storys there my favorit and yours is defenetly one of the best ones Ive read an ive read alot of them to be quite honest keep up the good work look forward to reading more
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just beautiful! So well written and you stay so true to the charachters. I'm looking forward to the next updates :)
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February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I’ll leave a review over here, even though I’ve left one at fanfiction.net recently and I’ll most likely in the future, only be reviewing over at fanfiction.net because it’s much easier and whatnot!
Wow, I’m simply amazed with this story of yours, I love it so much! The plot’s awesome and so is the character portrayal and character interaction, especially Bella/Jasper, of course, hehe! Everything’s also extremely well written and the smut was very nicely described, the one between Bella/Jasper in chapter nine was my favourite, naturally, hehe!
So Bella is now pregnant (Jasper’s the father, right?!) and married to Edward, awe, poor girl and to top that she’s no idea that Jasper is no longer at the Cullen’s, ouch! Who took off and are now staying with Peter/Charlotte, sweet, however I have one thing to say about your description of Peter; I’m not too fond of the way you have him “talk”, with all the; “Ya expressions”, it’s a bit annoying, sounds too much like slang, sorry! I just had to say something, oh well, feel free to ignore me, laughs!
Otherwise, I love everything about this wonderful story! I absolutely cannot wait to read more, so please update soon… Ps. best wishes with your computer! Ds.
Wow, I’m simply amazed with this story of yours, I love it so much! The plot’s awesome and so is the character portrayal and character interaction, especially Bella/Jasper, of course, hehe! Everything’s also extremely well written and the smut was very nicely described, the one between Bella/Jasper in chapter nine was my favourite, naturally, hehe!
So Bella is now pregnant (Jasper’s the father, right?!) and married to Edward, awe, poor girl and to top that she’s no idea that Jasper is no longer at the Cullen’s, ouch! Who took off and are now staying with Peter/Charlotte, sweet, however I have one thing to say about your description of Peter; I’m not too fond of the way you have him “talk”, with all the; “Ya expressions”, it’s a bit annoying, sounds too much like slang, sorry! I just had to say something, oh well, feel free to ignore me, laughs!
Otherwise, I love everything about this wonderful story! I absolutely cannot wait to read more, so please update soon… Ps. best wishes with your computer! Ds.
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February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Usually I don't like the idea of Bella with Jasper, you know? It just seems like he and Alice BELONG together. But this could change my mind! I absolutely LOVE it so far and can't wait for more!