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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You labeled 13 as 14, but I want the real 14 soon!
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE YOU NEED TO KEEP GOING! I love this story and CANT get enough! pleasae email me if you get another chapter up!
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* great new chapter. Would LOVE to see Emmett ribbing poor Jake!
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March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more more more!!!
I like it so far it seems to me this sticks to the general ideas of the book and are true to each person but I would sujest looking into gramer and when to make paragrahs just to improve the look and readablity of your work. (I have the same issue) Bassically the only time you need a new paragraph is with chages is subject (there can be exceptions to this if your doing several oppions on the same topic or such) or when someone is talking...and you put what they say in front even when writing in first person but I like it and you shoule keep at it!!
I like it so far it seems to me this sticks to the general ideas of the book and are true to each person but I would sujest looking into gramer and when to make paragrahs just to improve the look and readablity of your work. (I have the same issue) Bassically the only time you need a new paragraph is with chages is subject (there can be exceptions to this if your doing several oppions on the same topic or such) or when someone is talking...and you put what they say in front even when writing in first person but I like it and you shoule keep at it!!
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story - and love the snappy updates, no matter how short the chapters. Thanks for taking a waltz down this path; your other stories are gems and I was happy to see your name attached to this one.
Cheers
CB
Cheers
CB
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very cute chapters. Seven soon!
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's very cute :) I like it
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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good story, cute with the appropriate bits of fluffy.
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am still enjoying this a lot. I can't wait to see how Nessie reacts to what Jake has to say. Keep going you're doing an awesome job.
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE IT ALREADY
keep up the good work!
keep up the good work!