rate_review Reviews

I loved it!!! Very amzing story. five stars :)

It was wonderful. I love your style.

Awesome story, well written, lovin the lemons :)

I love this and I am very surprised considering I really cant stand Jacob and im not all that fond of Bella usually...but your Bella is perfect and conflicted. I like the way the you made their relationship seem to be all that it could have been had she made that choice. I think it is super hot..it has to be to be so exciting when it involves characters that I dont even like lol. I agree with Tabbs I think Bella and
Edward should have a talk, I know that you can write it beautifully and with great emotion...I also kinda wanna see how Edward reacts to Bella's being deflowered and her reeking of "wet dog"

*blood dripping* WOW.......

just wow. i have a dripy nose now....but i dont care.

very yummy yummy!

I love this story. Really good.
A suggestion; maybe you could have a slight confrontation between Edward and Bella, Edward being unhappy with Bella's choice?

I am really liking this story. I was entranced from the begining and thought that this is more the way it should have gone. I always did like Jake better. Please continue! And soon!

Wow! I never thought of Bella and Jacob being that HOT together.

it's wonderful! more please!

So far I am thoroughly enjoying this story. I like Bella/Jacob, and I think that this is beautifully written. Alot of emotions and the value of friendship is captured in this, and I think it is wonderful! I hope there will be more chapters, I'd love to see what happens next!