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April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my you must finish this scene! Awesome. Keep it up hun
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice job! Sweet, yet hot! Looking forward to more!
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April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This fic is really attention grabbing in all the right ways. The chemistry between Bella and Jake and her cheating on Edward is fantastic. Please update soon because the build up is killing me.
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now that's what I'm talking about. Go Bella! Looooooved it.
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April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely breath taking! Even though there wasn't any graffic, physical contact, the first chapter stole my attention and kept it until the end. It's been a while since a story had done such a thing. It's only partly due to the fact that I think Jacob is better for Bella than Edward....and that jake is hot; mouthwatering enough to eat and Bella should be so lucky, but mostly because you brought the story to life. Thanks for doing such a story. I'm glad and ready to move on to chapter two. See you there.
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April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! Jake is suffering. Can't she see that? He needs her to be his support. He needs her to be his strength; to put out that heat that burns deep within both their bodies. If only she'd just see that she could help. If only she stopped pushing him away. Ugh! I loved this chapter also, as you can see. Lol! Can't wait to get to the next one. Bella know's she wants some of that hot,thick werewolf....well you know. Well, gotta go. See you in the next chapter.
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! :) great story!
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March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet and romantic! Beautifully written! Can't wait for more! Great job!
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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm glad you did Bella's pov, it was nice to see what she thinks about all of this. Which ever way you go with the pov in the next chapter, I can't wait to read it! :)
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March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hotttt!!!!!!!!!