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for Of Wine And War

by KiriNoTenshi

person PJAndPBJ
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for answering my question last chapter! I understand what you're saying, he's just young and confused. And thanks for updating! I haven't had the chance to read the story in a while (summer school...) but I was glad to see this chapter! Great as always.
schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Atlast! xDD a new chapter!
I've been checking AFF for about 2 weeks since I really wanted to know what would happen next...
HOPE YOU COULD UPDATE SOON!
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! This is awesome! Please update soon!
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! you updated! I am still waiting to see what Mr. D will do to his son after he punch his mate :P
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I love it. :D

But I do have a question. If Percy is fully immortal, wouldn't he show more signs of it? I mean, even the Hunters of Artemis, who aren't fully immortal, show signs of being touched by the gods. In the books, Percy describes Thalia of looking and being stronger, as well as having a subtle glow since she became a Hunter. So I was wondering why the only sign that Percy is immortal is golden ichor. Is it one of those things that Percy will grow into, that will become more noticeable as time passes?

Also, if Percy is immortal, why did he look away from Hermes's true form? He can't die. Is it just a habit?

And what is Percy's status now, besides being owned by Dionysus? Is he the equivalent of a minor god? Will he have certain duties to perform as an immortal? Like, God of Watering Plants. (Ridiculous, I know, but it was the only thing I could think of that combines being a son of Poseidon and bound to Dionysus. Maybe being a rain god would be more appropriate.)

Anyway, sorry for nitpicking the immortality details. It's an amazing story, definitely one of my favorite PJO stories that I've read. Great work~
person Yukira
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm happy you brought Hermes into this. He's one of my favorite Olympians. I'm glad someone gave Percy some more perspective on the situation because he was starting to act like a total brat. But it's understandable with the whole ordeal that he's gone through. And you've made Dionysus a total sweetheart, with him being all emotionally detached and everything. Now I feel bad for the way Dionysus is being treated. But hopefully Percy will show a little more compassion. Thanks for updating! Can't wait for the next one. :)
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad we are learning more. And that Dionysus has a caring side. I always thought that that was the hidden reason that Rick had when he wrote the series, that Dionysus just doesn't want to get attached to the heroes. I hope Dionysus is in the next chapter!! More Percy/Dionysus! :D
person Atralust
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
will you pleas update already am deign to know what happens next pleas up date!!!!
person Litheral
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is like crack! I couldn't stop reading! Now i have it on my favorite bar and i check it every day to see if you update!
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I still haven't come up with a chapter for mine yet. I need to catch up with you *laughs* Good to see you back. Hope things are going well. ^.^
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