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Woot! She needs to get rid of that demon and make puppies with the one who has always been there for her! Get rid of that sparkly corpse.

it was really good... mostly a review of breaking dawn differently worded but it was good... cant wait to read more :)

I am loving where this is going. Please write more :)

Awesome start :) I hope your going with this where I hope your going with this (insert bella preggo with Jakes adorable babies here)

Keep going!

You must, must write more of this! This is a really great idea, I wish I'd had it! haha. One thing I'd do though if I were you, would be make it clear if you switch from 3rd person point of view to somebody elses. I was a bit confused at once point, then again I am confused a lot lol. Keep it going I can't wait to see where this goes. Don't get too discouraged if you don't get a ton of reviews, people are just too lazy to register sometimes! I'll be looking forward to your next update. :)