schedule
March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome start poor amerie
schedule
June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you need a beta. Your grammar and spelling need looking over. i think the story could be interesting. depending on where you take it. Your writing style and dialogue needs smoothing out. but it wasn't atrocious like others i've read.
schedule
June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please correct your disclaimer
It does not contain one of the two required elements—namely, the part in which you state that no profit is made from your story. It can be worded however you, the author, like, provided that you state clearly in some fashion that you make no money/profit from the story.
Failure to correct the disclaimer will cause your story to be hidden from public view after a week or so, but not deleted; you can still correct your disclaimer, which will then be unhidden again as soon as possible. Continued failure to correct the disclaimer will cause the hidden story to be deleted in time, as will re-uploads of hidden stories.
Below is a link to the Terms of Service in its entirety:
http://www.adultfanfiction.net/tos.php
In addition, the next link is to the FAQ regarding disclaimers:
http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=3560
Please remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.
It does not contain one of the two required elements—namely, the part in which you state that no profit is made from your story. It can be worded however you, the author, like, provided that you state clearly in some fashion that you make no money/profit from the story.
Failure to correct the disclaimer will cause your story to be hidden from public view after a week or so, but not deleted; you can still correct your disclaimer, which will then be unhidden again as soon as possible. Continued failure to correct the disclaimer will cause the hidden story to be deleted in time, as will re-uploads of hidden stories.
Below is a link to the Terms of Service in its entirety:
http://www.adultfanfiction.net/tos.php
In addition, the next link is to the FAQ regarding disclaimers:
http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=3560
Please remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.
schedule
May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhh this interesting will have to keep checking on this story it sounds like trouble for our favorite werewolf and his vampire friends. Love it.