rate_review Reviews

I...I love this story. I am almost ashamed at how many times I re-read the first chapter! To see a second made my night :) A third would make me even happier...>:D

Ee! New chapter! Have I told you how much I love this story? It is so hot! But it happened so fast. I mean, how did they go from that night in the forest to being a couple? How many people know about them? Does Jacob's pack know about Edward? I just don't see them being very tolerant of a relationship between a werewolf and a vampire but maybe I'm wrong. What happened to Bella? I can't remember if you mentioned her in the first chapter. Anyway, I love this story because I love this couple. I hope you add lots more shiny updates.

This was nicely done. I liked the knot business. I kept saying to myself though - a poison wouldn't effect a vampire. And I wish you wrote more about how they were feeling while it happened; it could be longer. But I really liked it!

i've read this story twice now and usually i don't like non-con but this was pretty good. don't suppose you'd consider doing a followup story to this one or another jakeward story. you're a really good writer. just one thing, since the vampires in meyer's universe don't sleep would they be able to be rendered unconscious? anyway, it's not important. just thought i'd write and tell you how much i liked your story and would like to see more.