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for Focused Madness

by fusedtwilight

schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Holy Snot! Wasn't expecting him to come out of the wood work. Question not only Fred and Leah but what of Nahual too. Joham either doesn't know of him or don't want to know and we know Nahual isn't going to let Joham or his sisters have Matthew. LOL :)
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
haha halloween 17 soon
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome I love this story.
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy! What a chapter 15 soon!
person Bee
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the shoutout! Even though I already reviewed, I just want to say that I love this story. It's perfect in every way! Can't wait to read more!
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is this chapter 12 or 13
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp* OH I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!! Can't wait for the rest of this.

schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow Love this poor Leah has a lot of drama going on and poor Matthew I think is falling in love with her. Can't wait to see who this vampire is that comes into their lives could we see a different side of Leah or will she end up having to run back to Forks? Only time will tell.

person Bee
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! My favorite line:“Mommy no need a man, she is having Matthew and Matthew is loving her much.” hahaha. Matthew is adorable and it's really cute how protective he is of Leah. He really loves her. They do share a special connection and you write it beautifully. I can totally picture where they are leaving since talk about small world, I use to live in Alberta. They are really friendly in the smaller towns so you wrote that really well! I can't wait until your next chapter!!! Who is the mystery vampire and will it be a guy? oh la la. Update soon please!!!!!!
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hope it's not volturi! 12 soon!
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