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for Focused Madness

by fusedtwilight

person Bee
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I didn't see that coming. I am glad that Leah is going to take care of him because honestly it wasn't matthew's fault, he just say Leah about to get hurt and he was protecting her. He didn't know that Sam was her previous love. I am so excited to read your upcoming chapters, I mean what will happen next? Where will they live? How long until Matthew has grown into an adult and when that happens, how will that change their relationship? Will she continue to be his mother? I'm so in love with this story! Thank you thank you thank you for updating and more please!
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sam's stupid ass deserved to get pwned. Chapter 11 soon!
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*wipes eyes* I read it last night and again today. Poor Matthew and poor Leah. Seriously both need some help and maybe she's more attached to Matthew than she thinks. I sure hope she can do this can't wait to here what else happens for them hopefully they'll come home one day.
person Bee
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Fusedtwilight! Seriously that was a kick ass chapter. I loved every part of it. The singer was definitely a twist. You know I'm really not a big fan of Sam in this story. I mean he and Emily broke Leah's spirit, I mean even if it was unintentional they still did it and expect her forgiveness but they can't forgive Matthew when it wasn't really his fault? Clearly I am on team Leah/Matthew! lol. I think Sam is overestimating Leah, I really do believe she will protect Matthew with her life. And it was so sweet when Matthew was like when I get bigger I hope Leah is my imprint, man even I was hoping that she becomes his imprint! It would be the cutest thing. Like him going to Alaska and then coming back grown up, seeing Leah for again for the first time, and them imprinting?!? hahaha. Ok I am totally jumping ahead! lol. I am positive I will love whereever you decide to take this story and even if Leah's love will always be motherly, it still is really sweet. Thank you so much for updating! I can't wait to find out what happens next, I am on the edge of my freakin seat! hahaha.
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nmzhgxfckjhasdgvfalhdfgcasdljhfg Chapter 10 NOW!
person Bee
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this is my new favorite twilight story. Seriously it's brilliant. I love that you chose Leah to write about because she is not usually a main character and I love Matthew. He is adorable and the love between him and Leah would appear to be unlikely but it is so genuine and you write it so beautifully, you can tell that Leah and Matthew have a bond that nobody can break. Like mother and child. At first I thought he might be Leah's imprint but I like the whole mother-child love twist you created. I wonder what choices are coming up? Will Leah have to pick Matthew over Sam? And I really hope you add a imprint for Leah, one that accepts Matthew as their adopted son. Oh wow, could one of the Volturi end up her imprint?!? That would be a huge twist. Maybe that's what her dad meant when he said choices will have to be made?? I am soooooo in love with this story! Please update soon, I am dying to know what happens next and I love how you wrote Leah and Matthew's love and dedication to each other, it's very endearing!!
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Leah needs to whoop Sam's ass! Chapter 9 soon!
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that its coming down to a major showdown between the packs with the elders siding with Sam. I do wonder what Carlisle's got to talk with Leah about could it be he's figuring on having to move to keep Sam's pack from killing poor Matthew. Please update soon this is as good as Pups and Tykes.
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooo very intersting. Bad Matthew, no biting!
schedule July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* oh for all thats holy. No, I don't think anyone saw that. All I can say is Sam better becareful cause well Leah won't stand for his stuff and especially when it involves her pack and Jacob. Poor Matthew I hope she gets to him and tells him not to worry it wasn't his fault. Please update soon.

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