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February 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I cannot tell you how excellent this story is. I love your character development of both the demon and Piper. I'd love to see more interactions between Piper and Robin. What happens to Catcher and Raffety? Is Ishiah all right? I can't wait to see where you take this story to next.
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A good working story. I hope to see more. I must bring up a minor editing issue: 'preempted' doesn't really work. Try finding a word more like 'assumed' or 'expected.'