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Well, I will admit that I was a little disappointed with the meeting. There was a lot of build up and then it just kinda, fizzled out. But it was still good. And I am still looking forward to the next chapter.

Aw! So sweet! I like the concept of Liam imprinting on Rose. I wonder, since Nessie is half human, would that give her to possibility of having kids? Liam sounds so adorable by the way. ANYWAYS cant wait for the confrontation between mother and daughter. It seems to me as if Jules mother has the potential to be willing to take on the Cullens way of life in order to be with Jule since she clearly still cares very much for her. I also cant wait to see how she reacts to the news that there is another way and her mate knew. Should be interesting as it could go so many ways, Calm acceptance, rage at the Cullens and Jule, rage towards her mate for lying to her, many many possibilities. Looking forward to the next chapters ^^ And sorry if this may have jumped around a bit. I managed to get sick and cant think straight lol

Ack! What an evil evil cliffy! I don't know what to say at the moment other then I like this chapter and I can't wait for the next one ^^ Sorry for not having a better responce ^^; You are doing an amazing job with this story!

Amazing job on Liam's pov! He sounds so adorable. Loved the swapped bottles. Guess nothing beats blood lol. Cant wait to see what happens with Rosalie and with Jules mom. ^^ At their increased rate of growth and development, I wonder how long it takes for them to start walking o.O I havent read all the books yet so I have no idea if it says in them. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter as always.

As always a great chapter. I like how you had her "final moments" like her heart beat speeding up instead of just slowing to a stop all of a sudden, its more plausible. I am also looking forward to finding out how her first hunt goes and what her particular preference in animal is since from what I can tell, you have not eluded to lol. Would you consider giving us a little insight as to how things are with Liam? It would be interesting to find out how his first few days of life are going, like, how he and the others are interacting at the cottage or how he may or may not be getting impatient about meeting his mother, things like that. After all, the first few days of a baby's life are very special ^^ Looking forward to your next chapter.

Yay! You put Jule's perspective! You did a great job with it ^^ I also like that you didn't make Liam's power exactly like Alice's and added the little twist where he has to touch them. That is definitely a power with potential. Not just for growth in how much one can see but control and even a little mischief as well. Cant wait to see what you do with it ^^

Sounds kinda like the baby might be another viewer like Alice lol. That would be interesting. Cant wait for more! I must say I wouldn't mind a little dialog from Jule, it would make a good perspective on what shes feeling and thinking while going through her transformation.

poor rose!

Wow, I dont get on for just a tiny little bit and suddenly there are two chapters! Awesome job as always. A mini Emmett sounds like fun! lol

*laughs* WONDERFULL cliffy. Loved the chapter and cant wait for the next one ^^