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May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I liked it up until the rather large time jump. The time jump was just a little jarring, and felt very abrupt. I kind of would have liked it better if you'd have just ended it after the whole wedding scene.
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December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked this very much. I don't usually read Twilight fanfiction, but somehow this caught my eye.
And I liked that you made Jacob smaller. It has always been a little wierd to me that the wolves were so tall.
I hope you write more stories. :)
And I liked that you made Jacob smaller. It has always been a little wierd to me that the wolves were so tall.
I hope you write more stories. :)
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December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved