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Please correct your disclaimer

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Nice start. I'm hoping to see more. There are a few spelling/grammatical errors, but nothing that detracts from the story. I'd consider fleshing it out a little more. You tell about Nina and Lottie, but you don't describe them in any way. And Lottie wouldn't have Nick's current eyes since he's now a Dark-Hunter/Malachi/whatever the hell he is now :P, so possibly describe that (that they're no longer the same). I'm going to assume the 6'8" giant is Acheron (mmmm Ash....)but a descriptor (goth giant, green and blue striped man rippling with hidden powers) to show it's him. If it's now, my bad lol.

I really hope to see more because the Dark-Hunters have been an addiction of mine since 2002 and I'm yearning for more!

ps. Sherri revealed the tentative cover to Sundown's book on her facebook page, if you haven't seen it.


marti!