rate_review Reviews

Very well written. I like it. :)

I really want to see William and Luke meet up! I want to see them make suggestive comments, Christian's reaction promises to be interesting! *LOL* Christian may be used to William-but Luke has no shame.

You need to edit the story so it's easier to read. It's difficult with it being all clumped together like that.

Love this so far, hope you write more. It be fun if Will could take over someone's body and be with Chrissy heehee

I love it, can't wait for more :)

So which is this based on the books or the movie? Because even if we're going by the movie-Percy is still jail-bait as William put it. I think Annabeth is a yaoi fan-girl! *LOL* PLEASE have Luke do the right thing for once-I often wonder what would have happened if Luke'd taken Percy with him instead of leaving him behind at camp. By the way-does the prophecy also apply to Christan? I really would love to see someone OTHER than Percy AND Thalia get stuck with the prophecy! It's hardly their fault that Zeus and Poseidon never thought to use birth control! I still think Thalia became a hunter to escape the prophecy. If someone had actually thought to give Percy an out-perhaps things would have went differently for him in canon.

Lol an STD indeed! Please write more. I can't wait to find out what happens!

And why exactly did I find this in the Luke/Percy section over at FF.net? Will Luke and Percy also be paired in this?

Wow, please write more! Poor Will and Chrissy, please figure out a way for them to be together!

omg this is like awesome update soon I love it, its the best percy jackson fanfic on here!!!!!!!