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for The Horse and His Cock

by JayDee

person Anon
schedule April 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ah, proper consummation at last! Of course, leave it to the Badger to be a bitch. Itching salve indeed...

Wonderfully done, as ever, and glad to have you writing in the prompts again!
person pip
schedule April 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Supremely absurd, and this bit had me laughing out loud:

Had she known that the badger had given them an itching salve instead of the sex elixir, it is likely her fear would have been much greater.

Wonderful, and good for giggle late at night.
schedule May 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Hilarious! I love it. The greedy badger will keep me laughing for the next two weeks.
person Anon
schedule May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

I always enjoy a new Bree and Aravis chapter, and this one did not disappoint! I loved the dual (dueling?) definitions of frittle, and what are frittles without a badger? Or slug trails, for that matter? But I do wish Bree and Aravis much joy if they do indeed get their elixir!
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy the Aravis and Bree tales immensely. There is a lovely quality of innocence in between the mighty cocks and pools of sperms, and the explorations into a young woman's burgeoning sexuality. And it's smut with a moral! What more could I ask? :D
person Leloi
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor, sad, unloved Shasta... reduced to voyeurism.
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, glad to see we get another taste of Aravis and Bree! An interesting way to take it to the next level, but it certainly makes sleep much more interesting! :D
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
21. Dream

Thank goodness for the magic of dreams so that they could finally consummate their lust. (Love might be more of a stretch than if they tried having sex for real. ;)) Again, you did a fantastic jog describing all of the sexy details. It worked nicely after setting up a great way to make Aravis a bit more sexually aware via the horny Hermit and his mare.
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You and horses I swear LOL! I like the contrast between her innocence and his knowledge and unwillingness to spoil her. It makes for a different take! I feel for Bree though, I know how bad sand in personal places can get...
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This definitely gets my vote for the most creatively pornographic use of the prompt! And somehow, Aravis remains sweetly innocent, and utterly charming. Truly well done!
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