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April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You most certainly do not disappoint. I could picture every detail as you described it, and the Erlking's vicious abuse of Lea's body was every bit as satisfying to take in as one could expect from the way you wrote the first chapter. He was indeed true to his brutal nature and pushed her as hard as possible. Great work and, I definitely hope you contribute more chapters or stories here if these two were anything to go by.
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well well! It's about time a new Dresden story cropped up here. I have to compliment you on the choice of pairing for the first chapter; I wouldn't have considered putting those two together under any circumstances and you really made it work here. The difference in their respective strengths is demonstrated swiftly and efficiently to put Lea in her place and from there she just doesn't catch a break; lovely.
Her steady descent from conscious refusal and resistance into withering pleasure-driven madness is a thing of beauty. I'm delighted to see you have a second chapter up and plan to get to it in time. I did note what I take to be a spelling error early on, where you have morals instead of mortals?
At any rate, well done.
Her steady descent from conscious refusal and resistance into withering pleasure-driven madness is a thing of beauty. I'm delighted to see you have a second chapter up and plan to get to it in time. I did note what I take to be a spelling error early on, where you have morals instead of mortals?
At any rate, well done.