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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You really don't need to make up kindergarten cartoon lines to put in Morelli's mouth to make him look bad. For making him look bad? Really? And the fact that you need to either means you have a two year old's grasp of characterization or you just make flagrantly OOC stuff up to make characters you don't like a) not even remotely resemble themselves and b) behave cartoonishly over the top, which either way means you're a poor writer and I'm decidedly off this bus. I don't even like Morelli, but after that I would definitely not be looking forward to seeing what you do with characters you LIKE.
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November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow love the story. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really awesome story, I hope you continue with it. It's imaginative and well written.
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August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just fantastic, is all i can say
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June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was so hot!! These are my fave book charactors, love reading a mature, adult version of them!! Anxiously waiting to read more!!