rate_review Reviews

AWESOME! I like this story about as much as the first. Keep going your doing real good. Can't wait to see what Tash tries next only to get his tail handed to him.

whohoo glad to see you liked my idea some. Can't wait to see what you've gotten in store for these guys again. :D:D:D:D total Thumbs up for you!!!!

awesome job its a good story. lets see what else can we get them into. Well what of the dwarves that didn't take anyone's side in the last battle what if Tash managed to convince them to join him. And what about enslaving once again those creatures from the underground that the Green Witch had? Possible ideas. Also remember that we have the people of Telmar, the lone islands and even the dufflepuds that could end up helping with the Narnians. Oh don't forget the two stars as well.

Just a quick heads-up... the first chapter didn't format properly and is showing as a solid block of text.