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November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Loved the last chapter and a huge fan of the series. Although I would say go back and reread some of the books. E.G. Qhin is never allowed to leave John alone outside of the mansion. Xhex and John don't fight together. Payne and Xhex are not yet members of the brotherhood. etc.
Loved the last chapter and a huge fan of the series. Although I would say go back and reread some of the books. E.G. Qhin is never allowed to leave John alone outside of the mansion. Xhex and John don't fight together. Payne and Xhex are not yet members of the brotherhood. etc.
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October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your story doesn't suck I love it please keep writing!