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July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's very simply done, and I like that. Though I felt there was little transition between his finding her near death and their copulation, I liked this snippet.
One thing:
Dangerous questions. Dangerous territory. And Jenny had leaped headfirst into it.
I would have loved to see that expanded upon. It would have been a very interesting scene to have him detail that for her.
Thank you for sharing!