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July 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Incredible, absolutely fantastic writing. The erotic scenes feel alive, the relationship natural and the quality of the writing is just top notch. I wish there was more.
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September 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh comeon! Dont leave me hanging
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I find this story very interesting and hope that it continues much farther. The thing is though, if this story takes place after the demon book, Artemis is a wizard, he has a bit of magic. Second, what happened to Butler's niece? Third, Artemis would have so may contingencies in place, Trouble's head would go the way of a Michel Bay movie.
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September 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I love the love and passion between Arty and Holly and some scenes are simply hilarious. I loved the twins in Arty's bedroom and the introduction to Arty's parents.
Although I'm a big fan of your story, I have to point out some mistakes, because I'm an annoying smartass like Arty. ;)
1. Beckett and Myles aren't identical twins, they look as different as they are - Myles has black hair and Beckett is blonde.
2. The elves are only fertile every 20 years, not every ten years. Holly briefly mentions that in the first book.
3. If Holly is a Major now she would have gotten two promotions within a few months. The next LEP rank after captain is Lieutenant.
Although I'm a big fan of your story, I have to point out some mistakes, because I'm an annoying smartass like Arty. ;)
1. Beckett and Myles aren't identical twins, they look as different as they are - Myles has black hair and Beckett is blonde.
2. The elves are only fertile every 20 years, not every ten years. Holly briefly mentions that in the first book.
3. If Holly is a Major now she would have gotten two promotions within a few months. The next LEP rank after captain is Lieutenant.
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August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great new people! The story continues on FanFiction.net http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7832868/7/An-Unexpected-Turn-of-Events
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February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hey just visiting to see how you were doing since the move from FF.net I am curious as to why you haven't finished the story transferring among other things
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January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really liked it, narrative style is a lot like the books
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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Read the entire story in one sitting. Loved it. Do you plan to release more? From the tags and some not so subtle hints in earlier chapters, it looked like you had pregnancy plot elements planned. I'd be psyched to read any new chapters you put out.
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't read it like this. I suggest some formatting, as many are out off by the ol' Block o' Text