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I really like that you take your time with your stories. I always know that when you post the chapter will be complete in story, character, and grammar (I have a hard time understanding sentences if the spelling and basic grammar are incorrect). I never complain about the wait because it it always, always, always going to be worth the wait.

I am very excited to find out why Harry doesn't like "cat men" in the upcoming chapters! (I'm also excited to see how the family fairs at the Fairy Courts in Dackens (yes, I sort of story-stalk you around the internet--it's good reading!))

I am curious if the gleam Anita sees if real, and if so is it Tom the horocrux ( can't spell this) or is it really Harry? It could be Multiple personalities.

Love this story. ^^ (but that "Qui" drives me mad...)
- Dime

We'll forgive you, winks. It's not like you haven't had a lot of your plate. How you are able to write a zillion stories simultaneously is beyond me. I wouldn't be able to keep my chapters in check if it was me. But anyways, great chapter. I'm looking forward to learning more about the experiments and what actually happened to Harry while in the factory.

Star, I loved this chapter, and I wanted you to know I love the way this story is heading and I love how much research you've done. I'm a research scientist in the U.S. and I'm about to start working with stem cells myself (don't take this as criticism, it's not everything in your story is believable, and very accurate) and I just wanted to let you know that (based on this chapter) since these researchers were donating stem cells to major companies they would have had a permit issued by the government (herein assumed to be the U.S.) to collect and use them showing they were harvested legally or the research/data/discoveries could NOT be published. So that would mean the doctors would have to have a guy in the either the National Science Administration (NSA) or another branch of the Department of the Interior to make the "factory" appear (on paper at least) as a legitimate harvesting company with Ethical practices. Or they had a really good counterfeiter that gave them the paperwork that even the Company's lawyers believed. I'm NOT trying to tell you how to write the story, you may have something planned out I haven't thought of. I just wanted to share some of this information with you.

Great chapter, really enjoyed reading it. Finding Harry's behaviour fascinating to read. Thanks for the update.

This story is very well written and seems to have a good plot so far. You're talented. Praise for the beginning of what should turn out to be a great read. I'd love to see how it ends.

I love this fic! I really hope you plan on continuing this. Its really good!

I love this story. It is so engrossing and I am hopeful that you finish it. I have followed your stories since I started reading Harry Potter fanfiction. I have never read Amanda Blake, but you are making me curious so I may have a new group of characters to love. Can't wait to read more. It's great!

I quite enjoyed this. Of course I enjoy all of your writings. I hope you continue to work on this.