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You should redo the pj series and make it more like ketchum's girls

Review fro chapter 64! Interesting idea! Artemis subbing for the gym teacher to get her booty call! I was also wondering if you could whip out the roman personas of the goddesses? I mean,Juno,Minerva,Diana,Ceres,Venus and Vesta could get some loving too from our favourite demigod!

Review for chapter 93! Wow, damn!Naked archery? That's really original! And it's not Hunters of Artemis themed! Hey, why not some daughters of Apollo in this context for a few others chapters? It would be interesting I think. :)

Wow, usually I don't read pure Percy Jackson stories, always crossovers with Naruto or Harry Potter, but I was bored and decided to read this one too since your others are so good. There's not one chapter I did not like and to date, I did read up to chapter 51. I really loved the hunter orgy on chapter 50. The school slut Drew Tanaka on chapter 51 was a real turn on too! To imagine the girl so dominated by her lust that she really rents her body but to learn that there's only a short list who got access to her pussy but is willing to suck cocks for money even if she's addicted to Percy's organ and he's letting her rent her sex anyway, it's a messed up kind of logic but hey, it's fiction and addictive too! If you could put more girls along with Sally and not just Annabeth, it would be really interesting! Maybe some real life consequences? They all have sex without protection. The goddesses can't have STD's and decide if they fall pregnant, but the mortal girls and the other demi-goddesses don't have those possibilities. Well, keep up the fantastic work, I'm going back to read more! Chapter 52, here I come! :)

if you still take request(or suggestions) i say Lupa at the wolf house.

Dude, you should change the title of the story, female demigods are called demigodesses and male ones are called demigods

Wow. When I first saw that you said chapter 93 was going to be weird, I was honesty a little nervous, but when i read it, OH MY GOD, I LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have always loved archery especially ever sinve I read the Ranger's Apprentice series, and this chapter was honestly one of my favorites. I hope you do more like this, and PLEASE don't stop at 10 chapters!!!!!!

This is an amazimg series of stories you have written. However I do have one suggestion: that you please make a chapter with Annabeht and Athena. Also, please make more huntresses chapters, and maybe a chapter with a little bit of anal? I would really love to see some anal, especially witht he huntresses or annabeth or athena. Either way, I love the story.

Can you do one where Percy knows what happened to Reyna and Hylla after Circe's Island and blackmails one to both of them into sex or he'll let the amazons know that their queen was a sex slave to men.

Update please? Getting closer to 3 months since it was last updated...