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for Pack Mother

by fusedtwilight

schedule October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE the nine (now ten) little monsters!!! I like that they have their own little quirks and personalities. From the Alpha to the Omega. They are going to be a real hand full. My next question is...now that these ones are growing so quickly. Will each member now want a little one that will grow slowly, like a real human?!?!?!?
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schedule October 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. You have to make more chapters. I can't stop reading, , I hope you make more soon.
schedule October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why am I not surprised that something more is happening. Nothing is normal with this whole story. I thought it was appropriate that Leah made a quick den and gave birth...wolf style. Now I have to wait to see what wicked thing you have planed for Leah next!?!?!?! More, please.
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You said it. Leah's has not been having luck in this story and its all your fault!! Keep up the great job!!!
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a WONDERFUL chapter. I never know when I read a new chapter what plot twist you have in-store; but I LOVE IT!!! I can't wait to see how Leah handles Hans!?!?!?!?! More, Please!!
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I LOVED Leah's present from the pack!!!!!! I can so see Esme, Rose, and Alice convincing everyone to expand the house. But of course, Emmett had to come up with a 'wolf-cave'...that was awesome. I was afraid that Ulf's group was going to follow Jim and Leah on their honeymoon; I am so glad I was wrong. No, no, no...don't trust the other pack!!! Maybe Jacob, Leah, and Jim should visit the 'spirit' to find out more about the others? More, Please!!!
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jim. First the talk with a VERY scary Sue. Second the talk the pack. Then the fight with the alpha. Man, what a day! Only to be topped off with finally having Leah! He is a good guy and Leah deserves him. But of course the spirit has to mess with things.
schedule September 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, PRICELESS, the situation with Rachel and Leah!!!!!! I also, loved that having to explain to the 'parents' was awkward. Boy, Jim through a monkey-wrench into the works. I could see Jacob being upset (the married wolf), but I did not expect Quil. I don't think it is fair for him to be upset. He has an imprint; yes she is young, but he still has one. More, Please!!!!!
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story immensely! You make sure that there is sex in every chapter *happy shiver*. I like that Rebecca is not mad at Seth. But she should not have left. The Black family is an important part of the La Push/Shape-Shifter community. I await to see what happens next. More, please!!!!
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like that Seth will finally be able to continue the Clearwater line. But I hear eerie music in the background. Yes, Seth with get luck, but will his imprint? I suspect that the twin (who is already married, by the way) will be Seth's imprint. Just a gut feeling.
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