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for Pack Mother

by fusedtwilight

person Anon
schedule September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story!!! I came across it and read it all in one day. I cant wait to see what happens next!!!
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
After the talk with Mother Nature, I was so afraid that this story would be coming to an end *pouty face*. But then the compulsion reared its head again *happy face*. I have a sneaky suspicion that Leah still must mate with Jim (the young man who left town)!?!?!? Even if I'm not right, there will be more chapters *happy dance*!!!! Also, I listed this story under my profile in the 'Currently Reading' section. I just had to recommend it!!!
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Que the 'Twilight Zone (TV show) music'!!!! This is really spooky. What is mother nature going to have to say about this? Prodigal Son?!?!?!?! More, plot twists...I LOVE THEM!!!
schedule September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just finished Chapter 8 and I had to post a review before I moved on to Chapter 9. Oh, the consequences for Leah, make me want to cry *sniff, sniff*. The poor girl is now responsible for not only the future generation of shape-shifters, she is now responsible for the hearts of her entire pack. That is a burden that only a VERY strong woman could handle. But Leah, needs to realize that she IS strong and that she CAN be what the tribe needs.
schedule September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh. I cried through the entire chapter...TRULY! Emily is a very strong woman to be willing to send her husband and soul-mate to bring Leah back. Hopefully the other imprints will become stronger women too. They need to be, to face the future that the spirit has envisioned. OK, can I put away the tissues now?!?!?!?!?
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter!!!! No sex, but i was on the edge of my set the whole time. Even during Leah's dream; I wanted to know how she was going to save herself!?!?!?! I can't wait for the next chapter with the 'boys' (lol). I guess the 'boys' will soon become 'men' at the hands of Leah. Oh, did the compulsion manage to reach out and ensnare Jim on his bus out of town *twilight zone music*? More, please!!!
schedule September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the plot and subplots just thicken! I like that the girls (imprints) are trying to help and at least one is willing to allow the compulsion. I think that Kim, might learn to be a stonger person because of it. And oh my, what a booty call with Quil AND Embry *I love the graphic description, keep it up*!?!?! More, please!!!!!!
person fanficlover88
schedule September 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I really hope you continue it!! :)
schedule September 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I knew Jim was a shape-shifter. It was Leah’s cramps that made me suspect. She had to react to another shape-shifter differently, since he was not part of the pack yet. I almost thought he was the one killing the people in the area.

But you gave us another plot twist this that one. I did not see that one coming. Poppy as a real werewolf?!?!?!? What does she have planned for Leah? I suspect that she will try to trap Leah and have Leah become pregnant by the others (her own pack).

I like that Seth’s friends and the pups are having their own issues with Leah and the compulsion. So many hormonal boys!!

As always, more…please!!!
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love how Embry and Quil are willing to 'throw themselves on their swords' and offer their 'services' to help Leah and the pack!?!?!?!?! Really tough making those booty calls.

And now the 'boys' want to help out(lol). Way to 'man up' guys!

Now, why would Leah be affected by Jim (even if it is mild)? Could Jim be a shape-shifter too (maybe an unknown)?

More, please!!!!
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