rate_review Reviews

for To Walk With Mortals

by Lucreace

schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is amazing.

" You cannot become mortal and I cannot become a god. "

*cough* foreshadowing *cough*

schedule April 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
really enjoying this which says a lot. normally I am strictly yaoi , or in this case, twincest. ;)

I think the story is really well written, structurally, functionally, and grammatically, all those blah-technical features are smooth, a nice easy, but not juvenile/simplistic read.
the time lapse is a unique technique.
always looking forward to a new chapter. thanks for all your hard work! :)
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