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February 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM
This story is freakimg awesome!! More, PLEASE!
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June 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really good! Don't let concerns about your English slow you down. I was really drawn in! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please keep it up! Maybe a little less introspection, though. The sex scene was super hot! Please keep writing!!!
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September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really kind of good, you should finish it. The English is a little akward in places, but really not all that bad. I think I like Jarlaxle better than Entreri, though- is she gonna stay with him or what?
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September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like Artemis, my favourite salvatore character. It's about time he gets laid. Ugh.. he will gat laid, won't he? Well, I can hope.