rate_review Reviews

Alice the 19th eh? was the title or the concept of several Alices influenced at all by the fact that Yuu Watase's latest manga is called "Alice 19th" hehe ^-^ this looks promising so far... I'm on to read otehr chapters

...That was one of the most amazing fanfics I have ever read. Period. Somehow the sad ending fitted this story well. Like a piece of art it is beautiful!

I give this a 10 out of 10!

-Kite

whoo!!i like that story,that was good!!cant wait to read the other one...well,if i find any other stories by you,ya can expect more reveiws from me!!

I would think that it would be obvious to even the most simple moron that this story is in fact, an AU.. without ever needing an AU label.

If you didn't know right off the bat this was obivously an AU by the fact that in the story I made Dodgson's other penname be an actual family name in which he married into... when he never really did marry in real life.
By the very fact that The mordern-day Alice had an brother....

If that wasn't obivous to you... then I would hate to think of your mental ablity to know the difference of when to take something seriously, and when something wasn't obivously meant to be taken seriously.

I wrote this story to have some fun, and also so that some other people who knows that this sort of story isn't meant to be taken seriously with it being an obivous AU and all... could enjoy this story.

You shouldn't really take things so seriously on an fanfiction site.. it makes you look really stupid..
I feel so embrassed and sorry for you.

However, for the sake of people like you.. I shall label it as an AU so that ingorant people shall not be so horribly confused ever again....

In response:

There is a difference between being creative and being blatantly, stupidly wrong.

If this fic is an AU, as you now claim it to be, there should be an AU label preceding the story.

One of the so-called "rules" is that a fic is either AU, or conforms to the rules set by the events preceding the tale.

I highly enjoy AU fics. I highly enjoy plot twists created by fanfic authors, "distortions on the original" as you put it, et cetera.

But I appreciate them as either valid twists in the story, AU labels, or stories that seem to have been honestly researched and posessing some knowledge of the surrounding
circumstances.

These rules exist for a reason.

*HIGH PITCHED SQUEAL*
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!
YES!
Alice finally foudn out how Chesirte feels about her and everyone lived happily ever after!
I'm so happy!!!...
well, almost everyone 8he he he* Poor White Rabbit...mmm tasty
*evil laughter and skip soff to read the next ficcie*

Hmmm, interesting way to end it.
I give it my seal of approval
*whips out this frisbee sized golden stamp and slams it on the story, leaving behind this yellow mark of a lemon with a crown on it*

I absolutley loved the whole story and I'm glad to see that...nearly...everyone came to a happy end.
Personally, I'm hoping Adonis and Axel get back together *crosses fingers*

OMG! POOR ALICE! I feel for her man because I went through a similar experience. I was molested at a young age but my parental units confronted the guy and and he denied everything so they belived him!!! *growls*

I loved C16 and can't wait to see the next chapter. Please let Alice live.
Please Please Please Please Please Please!!!

WOAH! So THAT'S how it all started.
Oh! I hope Alice lives through this *prays despertly*

As your princess, I command you to work on c17!!!