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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!? Did somebody say Care Bears!? *HIGH PITCHED SQUEAL*...actually, if I wasn't half awake that's what I'd be doing right now *sones off*.
I absolutely love part 15 and can't wait for the next part. *walks off like a depraved zombie to bed
Oklahoma, 12:13 am
I absolutely love part 15 and can't wait for the next part. *walks off like a depraved zombie to bed
Oklahoma, 12:13 am
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo! Care Bears, I have that video you know. If I can rig up my vcrs I can make a copy of it for anyone who wants one *big grin*
I loved Chpt 15 and it was very mean of you to leave us in a cliff hanger like that.
Even so, the Queen must be stopped before she ruins everything. *growls*
Personally, I think Adonis and Alice should stay in WOnderland. I don't see anything in the real world for them and I think Axel really does love Adonis. He just has a little tourble...ok, a lot of trouble...showing it. And when will Alice learn thatv Chesire loves her? huh? huh?
Well, enough pestering.
As your princess, I command you to write the next chapter!!!
*passes out from lack of sleep*
I loved Chpt 15 and it was very mean of you to leave us in a cliff hanger like that.
Even so, the Queen must be stopped before she ruins everything. *growls*
Personally, I think Adonis and Alice should stay in WOnderland. I don't see anything in the real world for them and I think Axel really does love Adonis. He just has a little tourble...ok, a lot of trouble...showing it. And when will Alice learn thatv Chesire loves her? huh? huh?
Well, enough pestering.
As your princess, I command you to write the next chapter!!!
*passes out from lack of sleep*
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Indigo, I did research... but There is such a thing called BEING CREATIVE, you know.
This is my own verison of Alice, and I can write the family history any way I want to make this fit my own verison. I never said that the backgrounds were true, did I? No, it's purely for enterainment purposes and to explain some of the plots.
After all, it's also called Artistic License. All you have to do is relax, enjoy the story... But if you're a stickler for the oringal and so called "rules".. there is other stories out there that you can read, without getting offended. But then again, Most of the stories on Adultfanfiction.net are Fanfiction.. meaning stories created by other people to suit thier own puropses, even distorting the oringal to get the desired effect to make an enjoyable story.
You better go somewhere else, then.
This is my own verison of Alice, and I can write the family history any way I want to make this fit my own verison. I never said that the backgrounds were true, did I? No, it's purely for enterainment purposes and to explain some of the plots.
After all, it's also called Artistic License. All you have to do is relax, enjoy the story... But if you're a stickler for the oringal and so called "rules".. there is other stories out there that you can read, without getting offended. But then again, Most of the stories on Adultfanfiction.net are Fanfiction.. meaning stories created by other people to suit thier own puropses, even distorting the oringal to get the desired effect to make an enjoyable story.
You better go somewhere else, then.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice try, but Alice was, in fact, a real girl. Her last name was Lidell, and she formed a friendship from age 7 to 10 with an eccentric adult named Charles Lutwidge Dodgson (who later made use of the pen name Lewis Carroll). Dodgson wrote Alice In Wonderland as a gift to Alice Lidell, whom he harbored a pedophiliac sexual attraction to (only one of many little girls he photographed in the nude as "artistic portraits"). Alice Lidell was married in 1880 and became Alice Liddel Hargreaves, and bore three sons. Charles Dodgson never married and died childless.
It's called research. Try it sometime!
It's called research. Try it sometime!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasps and drops jaw* Woah! I never would have thought! You go girl!!! Loved c14 and can't wait for c15!!!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*hisses in pain with each shock/scream of pain* I feel so sorry for poor Alice and that was a very enlightening way to explain the orgisn of the Queen of Hearts. ok fok forward to c15.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! I never knew!an;tan;t believe!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...as I was ranting...
I SO WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
I SO WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"The Queen Still At Large! Stay away from the Castle"
If Adonis could only read backwards.
No!!! Ok, I understand why Time had to tell Adonis this but Axel is really falling in love with him! Grrrr, damn it!!!!
And poor Alice, you SO have to save her.
And that Catapillar. WOOF!
As your Princess, I command you to write the next part!!!
If Adonis could only read backwards.
No!!! Ok, I understand why Time had to tell Adonis this but Axel is really falling in love with him! Grrrr, damn it!!!!
And poor Alice, you SO have to save her.
And that Catapillar. WOOF!
As your Princess, I command you to write the next part!!!
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
worth waiting for! keep it up!