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December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
While Im a huge Alice in Wonderland fan, I cant say Im a big fan of this story.
Seriously, do yourself a huge favour and get a new beta reader honey, your spelling, english and grammar are SHOCKING!
Seriously, do yourself a huge favour and get a new beta reader honey, your spelling, english and grammar are SHOCKING!
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December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your story is amazing... ve eve everything. and i like how adonis finds the hatter's logic weird but somewhat understandable. lol.
and doesn't alice feel embarassed walking around naked? it's not like she's showing any effort to hide herself...
i really wanted her to get raped. like, seriously get her brains fucked out. the chessire cat seems cool, don't ruin his personality. please.
all in all, wonderful writing. i look forward to your next update.
and doesn't alice feel embarassed walking around naked? it's not like she's showing any effort to hide herself...
i really wanted her to get raped. like, seriously get her brains fucked out. the chessire cat seems cool, don't ruin his personality. please.
all in all, wonderful writing. i look forward to your next update.
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I want to see some Alice/Cheshire Cat action! Have Cheshire Cat show Alice that sex isn't always bad!
Thnx!
~Malana~
Thnx!
~Malana~
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't get so upset at anais_rhys, please. After all, I DID ASK FOR THE REVIEW, okay?
Believe it or not, I love brutally honest people... in thier own way, they help writers aspire to be much better. ^.^
I've been working on the story, but it've sort of taken a backseat to my Sailor Aurora fanfiction that I'm rewiting.. which is competely a different style.. which I seem to be much better at. But you'll all get your update, I promise :)
Believe it or not, I love brutally honest people... in thier own way, they help writers aspire to be much better. ^.^
I've been working on the story, but it've sort of taken a backseat to my Sailor Aurora fanfiction that I'm rewiting.. which is competely a different style.. which I seem to be much better at. But you'll all get your update, I promise :)
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November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK, this is getting good, how dare you stop? =) Please continue
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November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey ignore that freak whatever who wrote u can't spell and blah blah BLAH. This story is great.
And YOU mIster. I can't write a story so I'll just be a jerk to those who can....... SHUT UP!! Every heard of " If ya can't say something nice don't say anything at all'? Stupid piece of crap. I HATE YOU!!!!
And YOU mIster. I can't write a story so I'll just be a jerk to those who can....... SHUT UP!! Every heard of " If ya can't say something nice don't say anything at all'? Stupid piece of crap. I HATE YOU!!!!
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November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey ignore that freak whatever who wrote u can't spell and blah blah BLAH. This story is great.
And YOU mIster. I can't write a story so I'll just be a jerk to those who can....... SHUT UP!! Every heard of " If ya can't say something nice don't say anything at all'? Stupid piece of crap. I HATE YOU!!!!
And YOU mIster. I can't write a story so I'll just be a jerk to those who can....... SHUT UP!! Every heard of " If ya can't say something nice don't say anything at all'? Stupid piece of crap. I HATE YOU!!!!
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November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say, I really like your pictures that go with this story, especially Alice :o)
"The Great One" please don't email me anymore. If Aurora was upset she would say so to me or just ignore my review, it's none of your business. This is a public forum and you can say whatever horrible things you want, but don't waste my mailbox space. Thanks.
"The Great One" please don't email me anymore. If Aurora was upset she would say so to me or just ignore my review, it's none of your business. This is a public forum and you can say whatever horrible things you want, but don't waste my mailbox space. Thanks.
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW! The Dormouse was SO cute! And I loved that pic with Mandark and Dexter. Are you gonna do more pics? Please? As your Princess I command it!!!
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SWEET! I loved your pictures! All of them. BTW! I've posted the pics for my story on my site!