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for Unfaithful

by BellaLaura

person Gaps of Misery
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, those last few chapters were really exciting!! I just love how you combine the phantom story with nowadays without ever losing contact to the "good old days"... it's amazing!!! :)
person beth
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. I love the way you write. I can't wait to read more. Emmy needs to dump boring Raoul. I see this ending up happier than the movie "Unfaithful" Not that I'm for cheating, but I hope the Raoul is cheating already and Christine will have good reason to dump him.

I look forward to reading your story. Only one compliant just write more more. Cant wait till the next update.

Beth
person callen5
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Please update soon.
person Anne
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh.... temper Erik. Lol. Update soon please!
person MARIE
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, but is this chapter six or seven? I like how you are moving this story along. Quite good, very interesting. More please.
person Blackrosephantom
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Greetings,
This story is kick-ass. Oooo, to have Erik as a teacher/boss. ;). Just to let you know, if u want to fix it, but after Chapter 5, the next chapter says: 6: Chapter 7.
I can feel how Christine feels. Sometimes, I think she overdoes it with snapping at Raoul. But I get how she feels, hehe. Raoul just doesn't get/respect her dreams. Thats not kewl.
I look forward to reading more. Please continue when you can. Well, on to reading other wonderful stories.
person Phantomforever
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, yes!! Fantastic!!! Great plot line, dashing, strong Erik -- classic unsure but lovely Christine -- more, we want more!!
person Debs
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE! absoutely fantastic. I love seeing Erik in a modern setting, so funny Christine's narative about sex with Roul. Can't wait for more.
person Gaps of Misery
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this one is really, really good! Brilliant idea with her thoughts in between the chapters. And Raoul's such an idiotic dick - I love that! *lol* ;)
person Anne
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just finished reading this and OMG! Can't wait for the interview! Raoul is a dumbass. Had to get that out.
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