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April 3, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Good, solidly good. Well written, well edited. Not sure Edward would have given in quite so easily, but it is nice to see Bela trying to assert herself in their relationship, something Meyers didn’t do much of in the series. I don’t know how to say this, but I feel like the story is lacking in the heat and passion of a first love affair, I just didn’t feel the excitement, the tension, and the release that the characters should have been feeling. Keep at it, way better than most!
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April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...keep it going!
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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it! I hope you do decide to keep it going.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes it is about time! lol i love it i think you should keep it going not realy retell breaking dawn but mabye put a few more of thes fun nights in were they should be and after hmm? and ofcourse fill in the blanks miss stephy left us
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes, keep going it is so good so far.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm not going to lie: i liked it a lot.
but my only problems were
1. she says that she didn't want to cuddle up to edward after sex because it was too hot. vampires are ice blocks.
2. they don't sweat
unless this is an a/h and i've totally missed my mark.
but my only problems were
1. she says that she didn't want to cuddle up to edward after sex because it was too hot. vampires are ice blocks.
2. they don't sweat
unless this is an a/h and i've totally missed my mark.
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December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've got to keep going! Does she wear his ring? Keep going, I love everyones take on the stories. :-)
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-serious- Keep going. This is good. I like it. I can't wait to find out what happens next. ^_~
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eh not what i would expect, I would think she would atleast ask him about sex or not. I havent read the last two books or not so yeah I donno if they discuss sex in the book...Probably not... Lol X.x I hope so though.
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, god! This is a great idea! I remember wishing they'd gone further when I read that part of "Eclipse", too! hahaha. Can't wait to read more...