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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, and I like your story. You write Bella very well, very much like Meyer does, which is to your credit. I detest the Jacob character in the books, but you make it realistic how it happens. I look forward to the next chapters, thanks for writing.
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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. I'll read more as soon as I've got a little more time. Really thank you for your review, too. Well written? English isn't even my native tongue nor an official language here. This wasn't even beta read by anyone. LOL I'll be greedy to read more of this soon. ;)
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story, and you pulled it in at a great time between the books and the drama there. I love it, you did a great job capturing the characters personalities. absolutely wonderful job.
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! I love the realistic emotions, Edward's show of jealousy and self-loathing...all of it!
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really good... I really hope this is continued. I sat here for like the last 45 minutes reading this. OMG, i want to be Bella....
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There are lots of spelling errors, but you write so passionately I easily could overlook that. Please continue soon!
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I think I was just as shocked as Bella that Edward forgave her!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great! Update soon!
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm generally not a fan of fics where Bella just runs & hops into bed with Jake, but this one is different. I like that you have kept Bella true to Edward in her heart & mind even though she's done something completely different with her body. Very well written, and a good take on a situation that is absolutely realistic in its emotional issues and conflicting feelings/actions. Can't wait to read more!
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
rose,
i like the story. i like that it is realistic in its emotional aspect. many people have made similar mistakes. i can't wait to read more and find out the reprecussions of Bellas rash decision.
i like the story. i like that it is realistic in its emotional aspect. many people have made similar mistakes. i can't wait to read more and find out the reprecussions of Bellas rash decision.