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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Twisted? Yes, but that was absolutely amazing. Great storyline and great development. Excellent job
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd love a sequel as I can see so much promise in what you've got here already. I'm sad it's ending but I absolutely loved the series. Great job. :)
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's getting better! Angstylicious! What will Edward say???? xx
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like where you're going with this. Awesome storyline, however I do have a suggestion. Put more line spaces in between non-spoken text and dialog. It just makes things easier to read. Other than that this story looks real promising. Keep up the good work. I also have a story in the works, check it out.
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
truly interesting
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is getting pretty good!
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey thanks for the update. Yeah i just relised then when i opend your story to read the update tht you had stated at the start of the 1st chapter that it was all human. Sorry my bad lol. Ooo James is an evil SOB i wonder how Edward will react? Please update soon!
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, VERY interesting! I need to know where all this goes. I do hope you update soon! xx
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey thanks for the update and the larger chapter. Im a bit confused tho. Are the Cullens/Hales/Nomads all human, but still with thier extra abililties or still vampires? Aside from that I'm really liking this story and i hope you continue.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey this seems really intersting id love to see where you take this.