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December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I gotta say this is a very interesting start you have got here. I am very curious as to how this will unfold! please continue!
I say Edward should go first! :D
I say Edward should go first! :D
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December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, I had this very same idea!!! Please, don't stop there.... moremoremoremoremore.... Please??????
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November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great job hate the Cliffy tgough
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September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You wrote exactly what I've been fantasizing about when I first read the part in the tent. Thank you!!!! Please continue!
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August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay.....a rather awkward (sp?) question to be left with. :D However, um....I feel that Jacob should be first. XD I'm a huge Jacob fan-girl. Sorry. Honestly, I think Bella would feel safer having Jacob first since she trusts him alot more. idk. But now, I'm in complete fan-girl mode and I wanna see what comes of this!
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I say Bella should go for both, but in all fairness, Edward has waited 100 years to get laid, lol! BUT, if she has Jake first, followed by Edward, his iciness would sooth any discomfort from losing her virginity...decisions, decisions!!!!
Keep up the writing and hope t see more from you soon!
Marti
Sorry, I've already written a review for your story but for some weirdassed reason, lately my reviews have been disappearing on this site.
Keep up the writing and hope t see more from you soon!
Marti
Sorry, I've already written a review for your story but for some weirdassed reason, lately my reviews have been disappearing on this site.
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OOOOh! This is absolutely wonderful and eye catching. I was so disappointed when I finished chapter two and there was no three. I love it so far and can't wait to read more. I can actually picture everything in my mind and they are all in character. I wish I did twilight fics on here, but for now, I'm limited to Naruto. I think the pairing you have JacobxBellaxEdward is the best since I'm all for team Jacob, but I already know how the story ends. T-T Anyway, please update soon so that I can read more of this delicious JBE goodness!
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Duh, both as the same time silly. :)
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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit!!! Ahhh Chapter 2 did not dissapoint!! I was having the worst day & you totally brightened my day with this update. Oh gawd I want Edward to be first !!! I love Jacob too tho :( Hmm maybe Jake has already lost his virginity to someone else so he won't be mad if the two virgins share that moment? Or
maybe Edward is like "I have waited over 100 yrs for this !" haha please keep writing !
maybe Edward is like "I have waited over 100 yrs for this !" haha please keep writing !
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August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg if you don't finish this story I'm going explode or something. No joke. You friggin rock. Excellent writing. Pleeeeease continue !